This is so eloquently done. I liked the first draft, but I love the tightening of the narrative and the flow of this revised version. Excellent job! ☺️
Boy this escalated quickly, and in the best way! This was white knuckle, edge of your seat reading. I really hope you're going to continue this story, I'd love to see where it goes.
This is so eloquently done. I liked the first draft, but I love the tightening of the narrative and the flow of this revised version. Excellent job! ☺️
I appreciate your comment all the more when I remember how encouraging you were when I first started releasing the series. Thank you so much!
How deep the treachery
When you throw away your soul
and pray to an old one
instead of holding your friends close
You lose life, love, family, and child.
While death blossoms and runs fae wild.
What magic these foreigners weave
that they can split the ground of places hallowed.
Strong they are when even an arrow
won't stop one from breaking the stone.
Amazing descriptions! You've done such a great job of painting the world!
Boy this escalated quickly, and in the best way! This was white knuckle, edge of your seat reading. I really hope you're going to continue this story, I'd love to see where it goes.