In which Jack meets a stranger and Sari awakens in black waters.
Very trippy, as the other comments said! I think you did a great job with the different tones of Jack and Sari’s portions; I could sense the shift in perspective immediately.
Thank you for saying! I always worry about that when writing different POVs
Deeper down, down you go, going to the fissure
blackwater calling for you, drawing you in, drowning you
in the past. Learn to swim, in VR, and that's all that due
to learn your past in rip and tide
there is no place to hide.
This is getting more and more intense, and I love it!!
Thank you 🫶!
You have built such a fascinating world with this series
Thank you so much! I have to say, so much of this world works because of all the authors that have contributed. Super fun!
Ahhh. Okay lets go. Love this instalment. Trippy indeed. Cue Highway Star. ⭐️
I keep hearing White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane!
Yes. I keep chasing that bunny too
This is your trippiest episode yet.
🫡 gotta be careful not to swim too deep!
Very trippy, as the other comments said! I think you did a great job with the different tones of Jack and Sari’s portions; I could sense the shift in perspective immediately.
Thank you for saying! I always worry about that when writing different POVs
Deeper down, down you go, going to the fissure
blackwater calling for you, drawing you in, drowning you
in the past. Learn to swim, in VR, and that's all that due
to learn your past in rip and tide
there is no place to hide.
This is getting more and more intense, and I love it!!
Thank you 🫶!
You have built such a fascinating world with this series
Thank you so much! I have to say, so much of this world works because of all the authors that have contributed. Super fun!
Ahhh. Okay lets go. Love this instalment. Trippy indeed. Cue Highway Star. ⭐️
I keep hearing White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane!
Yes. I keep chasing that bunny too
This is your trippiest episode yet.
🫡 gotta be careful not to swim too deep!