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Bridget Riley's avatar

Very trippy, as the other comments said! I think you did a great job with the different tones of Jack and Sari’s portions; I could sense the shift in perspective immediately.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you for saying! I always worry about that when writing different POVs

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Deeper down, down you go, going to the fissure

blackwater calling for you, drawing you in, drowning you

in the past. Learn to swim, in VR, and that's all that due

to learn your past in rip and tide

there is no place to hide.

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The Casual Writer's avatar

This is getting more and more intense, and I love it!!

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you 🫶!

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Cole Noble's avatar

You have built such a fascinating world with this series

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you so much! I have to say, so much of this world works because of all the authors that have contributed. Super fun!

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Jon T's avatar

Ahhh. Okay lets go. Love this instalment. Trippy indeed. Cue Highway Star. ⭐️

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The Chronicler's avatar

I keep hearing White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane!

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Jon T's avatar

Yes. I keep chasing that bunny too

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Josh Tatter's avatar

This is your trippiest episode yet.

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The Chronicler's avatar

🫡 gotta be careful not to swim too deep!

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