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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

She's back, and in terrifyingly tense top form!

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EJ Trask's avatar

this is so great, it made me late to an appointment

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The Chronicler's avatar

Now, this is a compliment 😂

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Fantastic! I am so hooked and can't wait for more!

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it! I really appreciate the comment

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Maria's avatar

Super tense and so well written!! I hang on every word and I feel like you give such depth to characters in such a short time!

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Bridget Riley's avatar

Oh man. That was intense. 😳

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you for reading! I was a little worried about the level of intensity!

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E.B. Howard's avatar

Ohhh. This was *intense*. I'm almost afraid to find out what happens next.

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The Casual Writer's avatar

This was a terrifying thriller, but I also couldn't put it down! I warily want to know what happens next!

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The Chronicler's avatar

💕 💕 💕 thank you, my friend!

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Isha Jain's avatar

This looks interesting! Can't wait to read more.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you much for reading :)

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R.I.P. McKenna's avatar

Great stuff. Great tension and description of action.

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