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The Casual Writer's avatar

Welp, you won't catch me in any parking garage at night this week! I couldn't help but envision a certain garage we both are familiar with. 🙃

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Yeesh. Mondays are the worst.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Aren’t they? 😔

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Josh Tatter's avatar

Why do I get the feeling that Alicia's assailant is that horrific Momo creature?

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The Chronicler's avatar

It didn’t cross my kind but it fits!

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The Chronicler's avatar

*mind ... it won’t let me edit it!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oof, elevators cause so much trouble! This was intense! I love the ambiguity at the end.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

I would have started panicking the moment the elevator messed up.

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Redd Oscar's avatar

Suitably scary for a Monday.

I'm suspicious that Alicia at the end IS the monster version. That it caught her and rather than devouring her merged with her and now she is both Alicia and Monster-Alicia. Great fun, thanks :)

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The Chronicler's avatar

👀 who knows, could be! I’m glad you enjoyed!

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Iris Shaw's avatar

'Ware parking garages! Great story - definitely had my heart rate up a few notches.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed :)

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Scoot's avatar

Sorry to be THAT GUY but I just noticed your teaser and did a reverse image search on google. Not gonna spoil it for others who haven't figured it out, but I watched that...play out...on youtube, and the premise has always been really cool to me. So if reverse image search told me true, i'm VERY excited for this!

Edit: can't replicate my result so now i'm not so confident. It originally said it was something with the initials "SotC" but it's not saying that anymore...

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The Chronicler's avatar

It might be! I’m not sure what your results yielded, but I hope you won’t be disappointed!! 😂

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Maria's avatar

Chilling! Teaches me to stay away from parking garages at night

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Miles MacNaughton's avatar

Nice read! Great tension and pacing all throughout.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Thank you!

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