I'm not a fan of Sci-fi yet somehow you've sold me on this story, keep writing Chronicler! Loved that ending, I like the rise in tension throughout the story.
Just when we thought we had it all, we get a surprise space lady with a ray gun at the end! Pew, pew!
Another wonderfully weird entry. The sudden shift back into waking reality for Sari was great. It captured that jarring feeling of suddenly waking at the peak of a nightmare very well, and you did a wonderful job making it feel very uncertain if she actually was awake at first.
Sari meets Rikki! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I'm not a fan of Sci-fi yet somehow you've sold me on this story, keep writing Chronicler! Loved that ending, I like the rise in tension throughout the story.
I’m so glad! Happy to know you’re enjoying :)
Just when we thought we had it all, we get a surprise space lady with a ray gun at the end! Pew, pew!
Another wonderfully weird entry. The sudden shift back into waking reality for Sari was great. It captured that jarring feeling of suddenly waking at the peak of a nightmare very well, and you did a wonderful job making it feel very uncertain if she actually was awake at first.
I’m so glad to hear! Thank you :)
The doom is palpable. Love this penultimate transition. The tension is rising like the water.