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Jan 29Liked by The Chronicler

Thank God for the rosary if you’ll pardon the pun. What a tense turn of events

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'A dream. It was just a dream,' he thought.

Insert gif of John Cena saying, "Are you sure about that?"

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It’s too bad we can’t use GIFs in comment sections :(

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Yeah, it would potentially be nice, as would tagging people in comments. At the same time, though, I can see why Substack doesn't do it because both of those options could be very easily abused when it comes to more polarizing/politically charged pieces.

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I love the Dracula allusion! And I’d never heard of valravyns before, so this is a cool folklore lesson for me!

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Feb 4Liked by The Chronicler

The atmosphere is incredible. And my first time hearing about valravyns too, fun!

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Thank you! 😊

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Jan 31Liked by The Chronicler

I'm really enjoying the serial! Your descriptions are so vivid and very real. I can't wait to see how Luke gets out of this.

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Jan 30Liked by The Chronicler

You know, I was kind of expecting vampires or maybe werewolves, but this is way cooler!

Just to clarify, did Luke get lost in the woods or did it just take him longer to get back to the truck than he expected? It just seems weird for him to stop to rest when he knows there's a "wolf problem".

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I’m glad you enjoyed!

You bring up a really good point. I think when I decide to re-edit this for maybe KDP, I will clarify further but Luke is building a fire and waiting because he doesn’t want to wander in the dark.

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Ah, okay. I guess I was a little confused about the timing, since he set off so early in the morning

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Jan 29Liked by The Chronicler

Fantastic!

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Oh 😮

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Looking forward to the next episode.

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