Very interesting. Got my attention and held onto it. I like the subtle clues about the town of Evening. And having the line go dead as he asks the wrong question? Genius.
Yah, the EPD sounds suspicious to me. Only shady people don't answer questions, especially if it's law to law. There is a small thing called professional courtesy.
Very interesting. Got my attention and held onto it. I like the subtle clues about the town of Evening. And having the line go dead as he asks the wrong question? Genius.
Yeah, the Evening PD sounds really suspicious...
Agree…and subtle enough as to bring it into normal reality. Phone service has a tendency to drop a line in the sticks. Can’t wait for Evening visit.
Thank you so much, Ben! :)
The setup is very intriguing so far!
Love the set up and the protagonist’s feeling of imposter syndrome is very familiar
This is quickly becoming one of my favorite Substack serials. Can't wait for the next episode.
Wow, thank you!
Same!
OMG I'm so excited about going to Evening!!
Yah, the EPD sounds suspicious to me. Only shady people don't answer questions, especially if it's law to law. There is a small thing called professional courtesy.
Definitely am enjoying it so far. Good writing.
Evenin’ ma’am. Just leaving us hangin’ here. Can it be evening now? Sheesh.
😂 Monday morning, bright n' early, she'll be here!
Ah, a suspense building chapter. I liked it a lot.
Thank you!
Oh, yeah, that phone call to Evening definitely sounded sus, as the kids say now.
Very sus 🧐
Really enjoying the atmosphere in this one! Feeling like things are about to get creepy..
👀 oh boy!
I’m curious to see if this is going to take a supernatural turn or not. Either way, I’m here for it!