This is too good. I was not ready for the fourth wall break! I am absolutely captivated by what you are doing here, and I can't wait to join in on the fun.
Thank you so much for saying! I was worried that this episode was too long, I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm really excited to read what you bring to the table.
These rabbits are strangely terrifying! Amazing buildup of tension.
Thank you!
This is too good. I was not ready for the fourth wall break! I am absolutely captivated by what you are doing here, and I can't wait to join in on the fun.
Thank you so much for saying! I was worried that this episode was too long, I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm really excited to read what you bring to the table.
I dare say it wasn't long enough! I really, really wanted to keep reading. Well, maybe I'll drop a hint sometime soon 😜
Such a great story! The Riptide is terrifying and intriguing!
Thank you!
Ooh, a fourth wall break! Nice! Also, I'm kinda wondering if I'm dreaming now. Of course if I'm dreaming...what does that make everyone else?
Ye gods, this is starting to hurt my head.
I'M NOT DREAMING, YOU'RE DREAMING!
great chapter - I am in deep, don't think I'll make it out. Later Elevator.
😎 👉👉 see what you did there! Glad you enjoyed :)
I love this! I never thought bunnies could be so unsettling. 😬
Love your world building. You do such a good job conveying the emotional attachment between the characters and the environment.
Thank you for the compliment! World-building has been the most fun when writing this project (that and breaking the 4th wall). I'm glad you enjoyed :)
I am most fascinated by how everyone has a different take on the dream world itself. Excited to release my part 2