Love it so far - cute introduction to the leads and the intriguing premise!
If it's okay to point out, I think there's a typo in "She removed her spectacles before replaced them several times."? Should replaced be replacing instead?
Also, I noticed a reference to Dr. James - I'm not sure if that was just the narration's way of letting us know that Dr. Ashford's given name is James, but it did catch me off guard a little.
Lovely!
This is a fun beginning!
So now I'm wondering just what exactly the good doctor is getting into all quiet-like. Hm.
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Love it so far - cute introduction to the leads and the intriguing premise!
If it's okay to point out, I think there's a typo in "She removed her spectacles before replaced them several times."? Should replaced be replacing instead?
Also, I noticed a reference to Dr. James - I'm not sure if that was just the narration's way of letting us know that Dr. Ashford's given name is James, but it did catch me off guard a little.
Anyways, fun start!
Looking forward to more! 😄
😉 thank you for catching those for me!
I’m so so glad you enjoyed
Sneaky little Pindle should know better. Clever gobbies always wear gloves when they're thieftaking.
😂 hehehe